Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the
Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attraction. To what extent do you agree or disagree in country
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
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plethora of country's development in Goodwill depends on the cultural . after a number of time they this rule in light of the fact that it
If any government imposed this kind of any rules for foreign visitor then it.
way to your International relation with other countries.
extremely
essential for everyone to know the culture and history of the country, due to the fact This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
onThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyPossible spelling mistake found.oughttuftsaughtsoughtn
oughtsThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thoughtThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
aas well
as history. If any kind of discrimination by the government or local body at the time when tourist visit a historical place then it impacts on tourism and country's income. For instance
, the German government charge more from tourist compared to local This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
ButThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changewas effected
on their International Relation with other countries and economy to.If any government imposed this kind of any rules for foreign visitor then it
also
effects on local employment. Because of this
rule tourist are avoided
to visit the place therefore
if government want to sustainable development then they ought to neutral for all This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleFor instance
, to increase income Indian government charge more from foreigners however
after sometime they realize that because of this
rule countries unemployment ratio is increased
.To conclude
if any country want to become developed then they ought to give equal importance to tourism also
due to the fact it is Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
aThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve6.5
Total Band
7
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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