Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
living in your country where you have speak a foreign language can use serious social problems,
living in your country where you have speak a foreign language can use serious social problems,as well as practical problems
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
LiveThis words can be replaced with:ought to
have toUse "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
aApostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "nations'" or "nation's"?nations'nation's
nationsPossible spelling mistake found.reasonresinreconmesonresowresown
resonThis words can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerousas well
as practical problems. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
someThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
currentFirstly
, our this country living that country people not learn foreign language This words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
goodThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
peopleThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explainThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
goodPossible spelling mistake found.verbalviralcerealvernalareal
vairalFor example
, Possible spelling mistake found.Narendra
narendraPossible spelling mistake found.modemodmodsmoiJodiLodi
modiThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soperfectly
done.Secondly
, people know foreign language This words can be replaced with:therefore
soPossible spelling mistake found.virtual
vartualThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuch
suchclearly
complete and other people were they work completed without any problems. For example
, If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Bill Gates
bill gatesThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
todayThis phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to meTo
Possible spelling mistake found.conclude
concludThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyas well
as practical problems because all citizens know not foreign language.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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