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your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
extremely
sorry to hear that we disturbed you with
This words can be replaced with:a number of
some
noise.

I would like to inform you that there was
This words can be replaced with:a number of
some
maintenance work taking place in our
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. For the last few days, we were facing water leakage from
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
taps and water was getting down in
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
walls causing dampness.

I apologize for the disturbance caused due to the drilling noise. It was not intentional
This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
the need of the hour. I understand that creating such noise on weekend is disturbing
This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
I was helpless.

In the future, I will take care of this thing and will inform you
This words can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
undergoing such kind of work when there are chances of noise generation due to the
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
of
This words can be replaced with:a number of
some
machinery. I will try to schedule such construction and maintenance-related work on weekdays.

I will
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
sure that such things will not happen in the future.

Thanks

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5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement

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