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some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are

Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.
Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.
Certain sections of society are of opinion that it is not ethical to put away animals in zoo and rest have an opposite perspective that their presence there is vital to ecology and entertainment. This essay will discuss both viewpoints with relevant examples.

On the one side, there is ample evidence that it is a grave misdeed to hold animals in confined public spaces. The central reason for this is two-fold,
primarily
it is
morally
unjust to withhold creatures for entertainment of human beings. Exhibiting them to general population
inorder
to generate revenue is borderline cruelty.
Secondly
, it is an artificial habitat and could
possibly
hamper their instincts to hunt which leads to ecological imbalance.
For example
, loss of major predators in the largest forest of the world, Amazon has
allowed
animal population to surge, crippling growth of young tress and reducing biodiversity.

Although there is a case for zoo's impacting species diversity and promoting inhumane treatment towards them, benefits that
are reaped
from it cannot
be overlooked
. This is
largely
because
it is the
only
space where conservation of endangered breeds is possible. Creatures which pose threat of being extinct
are nourished
and
also
increased by nourishing and enabling them to reproduce.
Additionally
, wildlife parks create hundreds of employment opportunities to local population. This drives local economy and the money raided can
be utilized
for conservation projects.

In conclusion
, it is unethical to cage animals for amusement of public and has ripple effect on the ecosystem.
However
, it
also
aids to preserve endangered species and
also
generate revenue by providing jobs to localities.
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Lexical Resource
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Grammatical Range
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Task Achievement

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